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Apr 11, 2007 8:18:27 GMT -5
Post by Jennifer Westall on Apr 11, 2007 8:18:27 GMT -5
Please post your comments and reviews here! Thanks!
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May 14, 2007 15:56:57 GMT -5
Post by rmillerloverwrites on May 14, 2007 15:56:57 GMT -5
I really love this story. I was looking for another romance to read on critiquecircle (www.critiquecircle.com) and i found this one, and i was amazed at how well it was written. The characters are flawless to the point where you can see their every detail, every movement that they make, and what they are thinking. And it's so difficult to try to decide who you want Lily to go with--Jackson or Alex. It's crazy! Great job on this one.
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May 14, 2007 20:02:33 GMT -5
Post by Jennifer Westall on May 14, 2007 20:02:33 GMT -5
I'm so glad you like it! If you'll send me your email, I'll let you know when I post new chapters. It's so much fun to read how these characters come across to other people. I like to have challenges where readers find pictures of people they think the characters look like so I can see the differences between theirs and mine. I actually print out pictures of people to use for my descriptions so I know I stay consistent. So if you want to try a picture of Lily, Alex, Kara, Jackson, or anyone else, go for it. I love to see what you think they look like. Then I'll let you see mine!
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